tri4

It's the year 2032. the sun flares hit the earth weakening infrastructure and causing all electronics to blow out. but the virus, the Flare... it broke out of a cdc plant. it killed many people. it made you go insane... want to KILL anyone who's not infected. i survived with nothing but a trusty ak-47 and a gasmask. i was hiding in my forified basement surviving on canned food. i was down there for at least 6 months. i made some molotovs and oiled and cleaned my ak-47 and m1911. then came the day i opened my basement door. the light blineded my eyes and then came a moan...

hia thar. im tri4. i have been a member about a year but havent posted much. so here it is. im a creative young zombies player that is very artistic and imaginative. i have made some zombies art so please respond where i can post it. my GT is elitepenguinvet . i have mw2, black ops (i think it broke tho) far cry 2, bf3 (my dog broke my usb so i cant update) and some more. i like penguins alot. thanks for your time.

hi my little hellhound you know, that north korea based story you wrote inspired me?

i havent been on the forum lately so if i did anything wrong tell admin everyone else give constructive criticisim Its been 20 years, 20 long years since the plague broke out of a military lab after a solar flare... central america and africa were the first to go... the plague then hit a wall of defense while going into europe, but it only took a matter of weeks to break through the line of defense. it spread through the rest of the world like a wild fire after that. it hit hard. all infected became the creatures.... no, zombies... within 24 hours they turned. it took only 5 minutes to spread to a different limb, which means the infected limb must be amputated within five minutes, after that, the only cure is death.... most were unprepared. my family was one of the only ones prepared... we owned a bunker 2 hours out of the city with enough food to feed 200 for 10 years. hundreds of thousands of rounds of ammo. we also owned a p.m.c (private military corporation) that consisted of about 3000 personnel. but the virus hit hard, wiping out the pmc in a matter of days. my family and about 100 of the pmc personnel made it into bunker, readying weapons, customizing hummers and helicopters for the battle yet to come, watching the tv and then listening to the radio when the tv went out. and now its been twenty years, twenty long years, and now it's time for payback... when i am done with this novel i will fix all grammar and make it into paragraphs. fyi, brains are always accepted at the land of tri4

Thanks for the advice. ive always had a capitalization problem. im gonna abandon this and make a new story.

secret cdc research lab off the coast of america 15:00 hours within the lab the scientists scurried around. within the airtight chamber the first test subject of the chemical weapon was strapped down on a chair. the scientists watched as the foggy chemical seeped out of the pipes in the chamber. when the mist cleared the could see the subjects dead body still strapped to the chair. the haz-mat team threw him into the dead pile to be burned the next day. near the lab 02:31 hours a ship was being swallowed by the waves. as they smashed against the ship. a wave was taking it down. yet the lights of helicopter gave the crew hope. the crew was lifted aboard the helicopter. as the last man was being lifted aboard, a very unlikely thing happened. a bolt of lightning hit the helicopter making it turn on its side for a moment, but the pilot quickly gained control and had it be upright, but at the angle of the helicopter blade the crew member who was coming up's head was severed. while the crew members were in agony the pilots had other things to worry about. the helicopter tail was on fire. the helicopter pilot radioed for landing at the closet landing pad, which happened to be the lab.... as the helicopter landed the fire reached the fuel tank, causing it to crash into the testing compartment where the chemicals were stored. and these chemicals had been tweaked by the scientists. only a hour and a half before. well im back and please give constructive criticism about my stories. i would like brains, for it would be kind. and please leave commets. Bye! :D

dude, good job! continue please brains for you! [brains]