When Souls Clash (part 2)

[Daxil Armaggedon]

Jack woke up about sunrise and checked his watch,it had been damage from the rain to no longer work."Damm,wish it still worked.From the looks of it,its about 7:20 am.",said jack to himself.Jack smelled something from the **** please report this topic, post ****."Smells good...",jack thought.

Jack made his way to the **** please report this topic, post **** and Denise was making eggs on a stove,but insted of a normal stove,it was fed by wood to heat metal to cook."Hey,you finally woke up.You were really tired am I right? You Hungry?"asked Denise."Yes,I haven't ate in 2 days.It smells really good.",answer Jack."Thanks,it is not much but i got a couple of chickens on the back and they just laid some eggs and we will need the protein.",said Denise."what for?",asked Jack."We must pick up more timber,collect fruit,gather and purify water from the stream near by and purify it and lastly plan our way out.",answer Denise."You really want out of here right?",asked jack."yes,it is nice here but i would like to find others.Don't you?"asked denise with her answer."Yeah,but it is dangerous,but is it your call i guess."answer Jack."Thanks,well lets get started shall we?",suggested Denise.

Denise handed a machete to Jack."I got an axe for me but only this machete for you,this should help us with the wood and for protection is walkers come along."Denise told Jack."Ok so that means we are leaving our guns,well lets head out.",said Jack.

They head out to the woods that sorrunded the little cabin.They found a big sturdy tree not so far away.It took them about 30 minutes to chop of enough wood for the day."lets head back now",suggested Denise.No walkers were present,acctually,accourding to Denise,non of the infected had shown up here.Once they had reach the cabin,they placed the wood near the stove."To the next task.",said Denise with a smile.

"we going for the fruit?",asked Jack."No,chickens put more eggs and I picked some berries on the way.",answer Denise,"We are going to the river,so get your gun,I got some ammo on my room."".22 caliber ammo?And what for is walkers don't apper?",asked Jack."yeah,i had a .22 caliber pistol but it broke and i had lots of ammo for it and also for my Winchester.The gun is for incase some animals decide to show up,walkers aren't the only threat you konw?",answer Denise."Your right I guess,but im also taking my machete.",said Jack."Fine,lets go now,the faster we get there the more time we have.",said Denise."What for?",asked Jack."...lets just go...",answer Denise a bit nervous and shy.

Denise took out a cart from the back of the cabin with many buckets."We put the water here and we go back,got it?",asked Denise."Yeah simple,lets go already,I feel we are being watch...",said Jack."Sorry."said Denise."what?",asked Jack."Nothing lets go..."said Denise a bit shy.

To be Continue...

[darkflareon]

Again a good bit of story. I do think it might be a better idea though to keep it all in one thread or some of it could get seperated and so lost.

Another point I think you really need to do is space out the conversations, I fund it difficult to keep track of which character was talking where. I also think there still hasnt been much in the way of character building, a story in small parts should have this early on.

Looking foward to see how this turns out.

-Flareon