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The Temple of the Trinity
The One
Location: Ether
 
The following is a zombies map idea. 
 
Maxis has finally won. The spires are his and he can finally reach Agartha. Maxis will finally be able to reach his dearest Samantha. Richtofen got what he deserved. As the world began to crumble Maxis discovers the horrible truth. Out of the Earth rises a giant orb of light. This orb is the life essence of all living things on the earth. All the undead and all that remains are eradicated as the Orb rises above into the sky until it stops behind the moon. The energy causes a massive disruption in time as the moon turns black and the energy is absorbed by the MPD. The Pyramid opens once more and releases the entity out of it's eternal prison. As eclipse continues everyone can see it in all of space and time. Richtofen, Dempsey, Takeo, and Nikolai look to the sky and witness the end of all creation as they get in the matter transfer pad in an abandoned German facility. Gary and Brock also look towards the sky as they attempt to escape the undead in a mystical jungle. Maxis realizes what he has done and is devastated by the fact that he has doomed everything and still won't be able to see his daughter again. As everything fades away......our heroes wake up on a floating island. Beyond the purple mist they see a temple in the horizon.....The Temple of the Trinity.
 
Dempsey, Nikolai, and Takeo wake up and find Richtofen examining the temple. However this is not richtofen. The voice of a german girl exits the mouth of the Nazi scientist. Samantha seems to remember this temple from when she was trapped in the MPD. As they approach the door it opens by itself then seals it'self shut. This is an ancient temple made of gold and contains many water glass paintings similar to those of a church. Each Painting resembles something that has ocurred in the past prior to you arriving at the temple. The world being broken, the jungles of Shangri-la, A western town underground etc. There are even some historical paintings that explain the stroy behind the origin of the MPD and why the entity was sealed away inside of it. There are no windows for zombies to spawn in from. Instead the undead will teleport into the map through rifts. These rifts resemble the ones from origins and will allow the undead to cross over. As they enter the temple through the rifts their eyes glow in different colors. Yellow, blue, red, and orange. Each zombie comes from a different time and dimension. Nazi zombies, Japanese zombies, Pentagon zombies, Western Zombies, Frozen zombies, Prisoner Zombies etc. Every incarnation of these creatures are being summoned to the temple to stop you. Fire zombies, George Romero, The Mistress, Shriekers, Hellhounds, and everything in between. The temple is made up of a main section, a cathedral, a graveyard and 3 houses. The House of the Doctor, The house of the Liar and The House of the Dream Child. Each house has a different theme to it. The House of the doctor is very bloody and gorey and contains many familiar items. The house of the Liar is completely grey. Once you enter the room all the color will be removed. There are radios scattered around and a notebook. This room is the most destroyed of them all as debris takes up most of the decor. The House of the Dream child is filled will blood stained teddy bears. It also resembles a childs room. Here you can find the Tranzit characters slumped under a table. They appear to be lifeless but they were never alive to begin with. In this room you will find Fluffy. The Original Hellhound which protects the child that dwells within the house
 
As our 4 hero's fight off the undead they begin to hear the voices coming from a chamber at the very end of the Temple. This Chamber can not be entered or players will automatically be killed. Then they hear another voice calling out to them. It is Maxis. Maxis explains that he now understands what the entity is and how to stop it. Unfortunately he requires 3 specific people. These 3 people are revealed to be the trinity. Maxis is the first person you need to help. After the event's of buried he banished Richtofen into the body of a zombie to die and be reborn over and over again. You need to put Richtofen's soul back in control. To do this you first need to find the one zombie that holds Richtofen. Once Richtofen is found the body needs to be destroyed and his soul captured into a gem. This gem will need to be thrown into a pit of holy fire inside the cathedral area of the Temple. Once this is completed Richtofen will once again be in control of the undead. This time however he is sharing his place with Maxis. Richtofen has reverted to the man he was before going mad and reveals that the most important member of the trinity is Samantha. 
 
Samantha's soul is ripped in two after the event's of Moon. Her innocent side was left behind inside the pyramid where it created a fictional world for her to live in. This world is the same one you witness at the end of Origins. In this world she spends playing out the actual events of the storyline with her dolls. Never knowing that her stories and her games are a reality in this world. Thus your mission is to free Samantha from her fake reality. You must enter The House of the Dream Child in order to free her. When you enter this room you will notice that the undead stop spawning. The Guardian of Samantha's other half will appear and protect her. This Guardian is The original Hell Hound, Fluffy. Fluffy has grown to an enormous size and will try to kill you. She will teleport out of the room through a beam of lightning and you will become swarmed by a nonstop barrage of Hellhounds. Each time you kill enough hellhounds Fluffy will poke her head through the wall like in Alcatraz and try to absorb you into her open mouth. The only time you can harm her is when she opens her mouth in order to absorb you. When enough damage is delt Fluffy will vanish from the room and the young girl will scream after realizing the reality of the situation. This scream is so unnatural that it sends chills down your spine. Samantha must now collect the soul into a gem and dip it into the cathedral water. Samantha will now be in control alongside Richtofen and Maxis. The trinity allow Richtofen to split his soul in half. Richtofen to take his place in his original body.  The trinity and the original team is finally together. All that remains is for The entity to be defeated. At this point in time you are given 3 gifts by the trinity. The box is now in a constant fire sale, You now have all Perks ever made which do not go away, and as a third gift the Pack a Punch  is now on permanent Bonfire sale in the graveyard. The quest is not over yet. According to the Trinity there is one more entity that needs to be discovered. This entity is known as the One. This person shall reveal themselves during the final battle with the Entity. 
 
Our 4 heroes Must gather the weapons that shall defeat the Entity. These weapons are the original Staves of the Elements which were featured in origins. Unlike the staves in origins the staves found inside the Temple give the 4 characters the powers of the 4 horsemen of the apocalypse. The staff of Pestilence belongs to Nikolai, it has the ability to kill zombies in large amounts. The green smoke that emits form the staff will cause the undead to contract every disease in existence thus killing them. The Staff of War belongs to Dempsey, It shoots Flames and causes the undead to explode when touched by the fire. The staff of famine is given to Takeo. With this staff the undead will shrivel up until their muscles can no longer support their bodies. The Staff of death belongs to Richtofen. His staff causes Black Electricity to consume the undead. Pure Black smoke will emit from the eyes of the undead and escape the mouths as well. Once these 4 staffs are claimed by solving the riddles on the tombstones you will finally be able to enter the Giant doors and battle the Entity.
 
The Room you have entered can not be exited once you go in. It is a black place with nothing in it. The entity is a Black shadowy humanoid which can take any form it wants.  Once the battle begins Samantha, Maxis, and Richtofen will use their new power to weaken the beast and make it mortal. The entity can spawn anything it wants into the field. It will also mumble words to it'self which are completely Warped and can not be understood. The Entity will also change the playing field to resemble any of the previous maps besides nach der untoten. You must shoot at the entity in order to break it apart. It will then change the playing field and you must go searching for the scattered shadows that are hidden around the map. Knife these shadows to destroy them. Each time you destroy a shadow you harm the entity. Once the entity is damaged enough it is revealed that The entity is and always has been the One. The voices this entire time have been the entity trying to get Richtofen to free it. It knew that only if it were free it could be killed. So the entity waited for the One to come back and kill it. Once Richtofen was manipulated it caused a chain of events which would eventually end up in the entity's demise. This is also why the time loop exists. Had Dempsey, Nikolai, Takeo and Richtofen failed to defeat the entity, The One would send them back to Shi No Numa in order for them to try again. With the Entity destroyed everything time is reset. 
 
You watch all the easter eggs unraveling as time flows backwards. Everything is put back to the way it was before and the pyramid vanishes from existence. Meanwhile at Der Riese, Edward Richtofen approaches the Teleporter. He put's his hand on the activation switch. The experiment fails.....................
 
 
 
 
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You have great story telling skills here, but where's the actual map idea? What are the mechanics and what not? What's new? What kind of weapons are included? Perks? Buildables? How many rooms? Details man! A great story map is fantastic but it wont sell without a few flashy bobbles to bring in the crowds...

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